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Do you know what’s wrong with me?

I just don’t know right now.

Real confused, full of self doubt,

I don’t know anything right now.

What’s wrong with me?

Why am I wrong?

Is it because I beat a different drum,

Because I sing a different song,

Does it mean anything?

If I walked in zig-zag lines,

Or on a different street,

I’m sure it wouldn’t really mean

Anything.

But because high society,

Declared that I am wrong.

Does anyone still notice me,

Or would I be just gone?

I don’t know what’s wrong with me,

I’m really not that bad.

But society dictates everything,

And I’m not their next fad.
©2009-2010 ~crazy-cookie-head
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Er. Five second emotional schpeal. My inner termoil.

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:iconsilvernightsky:
Know the feelin - at least none of us are alone. Great poem :D

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For a dreamer, night's the only time of day.
:iconcrazy-cookie-head:
Thanks! I've had extreme writer's block, so it took me forever to get this started. And then it just started flowing.

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You know, humanity is only as good as the people make it.
:iconsilvernightsky:
You know, I heard writer's block is just your brain trying to sort things out. Maybe you just needed to vent out before anything else ^_^

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For a dreamer, night's the only time of day.
:iconcrazy-cookie-head:
Really? That actually makes sense. I'm going to try that. Thanks.

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You know, humanity is only as good as the people make it.
:iconsilvernightsky:
No prob! From writer to writer ^_^

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For a dreamer, night's the only time of day.
:iconcrazy-cookie-head:
I really appreciate the help. Thanks! ^.^

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You know, humanity is only as good as the people make it.

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